When I Pretend

When I Pretend: Blood is spilled, and instead of James losing his life, a mate is found and the world is in a world of hurt. The God of War is about to give lessons on why leaving him and his alone is a good idea.

Rated M for a reason folks.

Many thanks to thewriteashley for taking up the reigns on Betaing this. Again, this is your reviews making this a reality.

Disclaimer for the story contained under this heading: Stephenie Myers own Twilight. Not me.

Extras:
Character List
Song List

Chapters:
Chapter One – Condescending Talk
Chapter Two – Sift Through the Lies
Chapter Three — Set You Free
Chapter Four – Gonna Be Ok
Chapter Five – Age Has Never Made Me Wise

23 Comments

theladykt on May 5, 2013 at 10:16 pm

OOOOH I’m gonna love this one.
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thewriteashley on May 6, 2013 at 3:48 pm

Love me some Jasper – but you already know that 😉 Can’t wait fr what you come up with next…
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kiraheart94 on May 22, 2013 at 7:57 pm

I’m sooo glad you updated!!!! I just love me some Jasper!!
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Dukkie on May 23, 2013 at 3:40 am

I love it
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Jessica on May 25, 2013 at 5:06 pm

Fabulous! !!
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Linds on July 13, 2013 at 7:35 pm

Looking forward to more. Loving this story.
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Michelle Fraga on August 30, 2013 at 9:47 pm

i was wondering when you wood update when i pretend?
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Mavericka on October 7, 2013 at 3:24 pm

loved your story so far 🙂 and loved Jasper even more! lol!! can’t wait for more of both
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Shena03 on January 29, 2014 at 10:09 pm

This is a fantastic story. Can’t wait for more 🙂
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tibbs8482 on February 8, 2014 at 10:32 am

I really like this story and hope that you update soon. I just recently read a new beginning and would love to be able to read the rest.
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Krystan on May 4, 2014 at 9:41 pm

I hope you update soon, I LOVE this story!
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Michelle Fraga on August 4, 2014 at 10:05 pm

i hope you start on this one soon please
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alanna on October 18, 2014 at 7:39 pm

Love this story, hope you continue it soon!
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flavelletania on November 10, 2014 at 8:50 pm

I like your story but would like to know how to get the updates for them to follow them and when is the next chapter going to be out ?
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- Kittyinaz on November 13, 2014 at 1:31 pm
  
  Up near the top of the side bar is a place you can put your email to get notifications of me updating. I am trying to get caught up, and I know this is a favorite, but I can’t promise a when.
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twilight-et-the-vampire on November 30, 2014 at 1:02 pm

Hâte de lire la suite
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Jenniy on January 4, 2015 at 12:55 pm

Love it so much
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Rachel on March 8, 2015 at 3:35 am

Are you still working on this story? It’s brilliant and I would love to read more.
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- Kittyinaz on March 8, 2015 at 2:52 pm
  
  It is not finished, it will be worked on once What If is finished. but it is far from abandoned.
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Abbey on May 26, 2017 at 3:40 pm

I have loved this story for years, I hope you continue it. It’s just so good.
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missmaniquies.com on July 29, 2018 at 11:03 am

Óleo sobre tabla, 26,7 x 20 cm, 1570 – 1572.
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Susanne Jakobsson on October 28, 2018 at 4:16 pm

Really hope there is a update on this story soon.
I love this story and would love to see it to the end
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c health in honaker va on April 28, 2019 at 12:09 pm

Wonderful site. Lots of helpful information here.
I’m sending it to a few pals ans also sharing in delicious.
And certainly, thanks on your sweat!
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